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The Mind
The mind is such a mysterious being
a creator and destroyer of things
a calm in the void
a demon annoyed
in this prison all our hopes and dreams cling
a creator and destroyer of things
a calm in the void
a demon annoyed
in this prison all our hopes and dreams cling
Published 10th Oct 2018
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 2:02pm
"a creator and destroyer of things"
Ain't that the dammed truth!? It never stops moving. Even when we're sleeping. Capable of so much...including destruction. Well said, Tim!
Ain't that the dammed truth!? It never stops moving. Even when we're sleeping. Capable of so much...including destruction. Well said, Tim!
10th Oct 2018 2:21pm
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 3:23pm
Isn't that the truth??
I like that Tim. I like 'thinking' things. Did you ever think maybe this is just all in YOUR mind? That I'm not even here? I'm not even typing this? I'm actually a creation of YOUR thoughts, or perhaps I'm the real one, and you're a creation of mine??!!
Holy Twilight Zone! lol.
Thanks Tim!
MZ.
I like that Tim. I like 'thinking' things. Did you ever think maybe this is just all in YOUR mind? That I'm not even here? I'm not even typing this? I'm actually a creation of YOUR thoughts, or perhaps I'm the real one, and you're a creation of mine??!!
Holy Twilight Zone! lol.
Thanks Tim!
MZ.
10th Oct 2018 3:26pm
Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 3:29pm
True! But why do I keep messing things up so badly??!! Maybe I am here! Damn! lol.
Good talking to you, my friend!
MZ.
Good talking to you, my friend!
MZ.
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10th Oct 2018 4:05pm
Destroyer of things...makes me think of Robert Oppenheimer...responsible for the A-bomb.
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
10th Oct 2018 4:20pm
10th Oct 2018 6:08pm
As a quote by Osho-
The mind;
A beautiful servant
A dangerous master.
The mind;
A beautiful servant
A dangerous master.
10th Oct 2018 7:33pm
10th Oct 2018 8:05pm
Amazing how it can all mean so many different things at the same; the mind and everything else. Nice overview.
10th Oct 2018 8:07pm
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12th Oct 2018 00:05am
Damn you hit it. It can be a helpful friend or a demon wreaking havoc. It needs discipline to work the right way.
12th Oct 2018 00:09am
