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the October leaves
the leaves fall
from their
green birth
to the dry
ground
the wind
carries them
like orphaned
children and
they are gone
(c) 2018 R.R. Zinn
Published 8th Oct 2018
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asks the question...which is harder, the holding on or the letting go. I like the piece...it isn't too wordy, so the reader pays attention to your message!
9th Oct 2018 1:54am
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
9th Oct 2018 6:06pm
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