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I Want
I want to feel you
Taste you
Match our heartbeats
I want to view inside you
Gently kiss you
Relish your body heat
Current arcs from my touch
Burning pleasure embers
On your soul
I want to nest inside you
Beside you
Above and behind you
I want you
To savor me
In swallows
See the depths I see
Be what I need
As I command
As if nothing else matters
Taste you
Match our heartbeats
I want to view inside you
Gently kiss you
Relish your body heat
Current arcs from my touch
Burning pleasure embers
On your soul
I want to nest inside you
Beside you
Above and behind you
I want you
To savor me
In swallows
See the depths I see
Be what I need
As I command
As if nothing else matters
Published 2nd Nov 2011
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3rd Nov 2011 1:11pm
This is good but it could be better if you extend your wording and add some flair to it. Make it more visually inspiring.
You have made a good start simply add your passion to it!
You have made a good start simply add your passion to it!
