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Regarding poetry and the ability to be taken seriously when my appearance is no factor. I often feel strongly that my looks don't compliment my personality and mind...maybe I'm a bit dysphoric.
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6th Oct 2018 10:51pm
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6th Oct 2018 10:59pm
"when a screen name speaks true-er than my physicality"
"i'm realest in the 'lapse'; as an abstract"
these two lines are relatable and speak a thousand times over in my mind. you're a great poet and I still await to buy the book...i'm just wondering what the titles going to be?
i'd like to start another wave of collaborations with people, and you ma'am would be first on my list. throw me a message,idea or an thought and lets build; break down these walls that box us to a frenzy.
well penned.
"i'm realest in the 'lapse'; as an abstract"
these two lines are relatable and speak a thousand times over in my mind. you're a great poet and I still await to buy the book...i'm just wondering what the titles going to be?
i'd like to start another wave of collaborations with people, and you ma'am would be first on my list. throw me a message,idea or an thought and lets build; break down these walls that box us to a frenzy.
well penned.
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Re: Re. Free
7th Oct 2018 00:37am
Dude I appreciate it more than you know. Thank you :)
I'll think about it today, we really should collab more! Your latest pieces have been really dope.
I'll think about it today, we really should collab more! Your latest pieces have been really dope.
Re. Free
7th Oct 2018 1:47am
let me add this to my reading list so that I can fully digest it i'll come back with a complete response
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7th Oct 2018 6:59am
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7th Oct 2018 7:02am
Bravisima Atomik! You are indeed "capable of a firm sermon." The last passage is an important one. That is precisely why I am not seen in my profile pic. Although it is fascinating how many times I am mistaken for a female poet. I believe you have an intelligent look about you but I understand this environment well and, therefore, I understand your plight.
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 12:31pm
( your ) Voice is all I care about and until I actually hear it, I hear a version of it based on something that vibrates through with your words. It might not be anything like your actual voice, but it still complements your poetry nicely.
For the longest time, I imagined Ahavati sounded somewhat like Minnie Mouse. Boy, was I way off LOL.
And those of us who write from female perspectives get it.
For the longest time, I imagined Ahavati sounded somewhat like Minnie Mouse. Boy, was I way off LOL.
And those of us who write from female perspectives get it.
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Re. Free
7th Oct 2018 1:32pm
So relate, I think many people see me on the surface and have no idea what depths lie within. It’s rare that I share my poetry with people in my life, but there is also poetry that I don’t post that is only for those who do ‘get me.’ The pen can really speak volumes, and yours certainly does!
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