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It’s all in vain with you
I give up
All I have given is left
To be lost
It’s all in vain with you
In circles we round
I’m a ruin
Of what I was
It’s all in vain with you
My life is a fail
I fall
Again, hard
It’s all in vain with you
I’m never enough, I know
’Cause I’m nothing
And that’s the only thing
We’ll become
It’s all in vain with you
I know it’s cliche
But there is no love
'Cause
You
Don't
Beleive!
I give up
All I have given is left
To be lost
It’s all in vain with you
In circles we round
I’m a ruin
Of what I was
It’s all in vain with you
My life is a fail
I fall
Again, hard
It’s all in vain with you
I’m never enough, I know
’Cause I’m nothing
And that’s the only thing
We’ll become
It’s all in vain with you
I know it’s cliche
But there is no love
'Cause
You
Don't
Beleive!
Published 5th Oct 2018
Author's Note
Feeling croquis
No rhyme, raw
No rhyme, raw
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5th Oct 2018 10:56pm
Thank you my friend, especially for that nickname! :D This is written in moment of rage and disappointment, I think it could be much better, but that feeling didn't allow me patience. :DD And it's not changeable anymore 'cause the moment is gone. Weird!! :D
6th Oct 2018 11:00am
I get a sense that you have been hurt by somebody? You show such strong emotions in your words.
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
6th Oct 2018 11:08pm
Yes, I was. Damn strong feeling, my friend
You got it.
I told you, love is a slow torture
Opressing us . . .
Pushing us across our limits
Attacks when we put our shield down
You got it.
I told you, love is a slow torture
Opressing us . . .
Pushing us across our limits
Attacks when we put our shield down
6th Oct 2018 11:13pm
6th Oct 2018 11:22pm
