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Along Came A Spider
There you sat
Brooding
In envy and contempt
Coveting through your eyes
Feeling through your ears
Craving through your leathery skin
Carnivorous you...
We began to see you clear as day
Stalking..talking spells into existence
Sin seller
Posed as a fortune teller
Poised as one who fulfills fantasies
A broken phantom roaming the opera
Combing our sacredness
As sustenance for your aching hollow
Sifting through personas
Mining for secrets to play off one another
While gifting lies coated in saccharine
Artificial sweet bitch you
Talking sideways out of your mouth
I speak directly
To cut through all of your bullshit
I consciously rebuked you
His soul puked out the venom
That was spat in his drink
By that little demon monkey riding your back
Funky...foul...brimstone-scented
Truly you must be demented
If you ever though we were cemented
As a trinity
Treacherous cunt
Trying to nest up in our alpha quadrant
What? You actually thought you was
Gonna squat and lay your filthy ass eggs up in here
Bitch pleeze
Where they do that at?
Betrayer of your own divinity
With all that sulfur brimming in your blood
You must really be burning with desire
Always wanting more than
What was offered
Take your wayward backward ass
Toxic tendencies
Your forked tongue
And your sand paper pussy
From out of our house
Our home
Our sanctuary
You are not welcome here
You ratchet demonic wench..fuck the sage
You can get the 12 gauge
If you ever again trespass on our turf
I'll make you surf the ether
So don't you ever again
Try to threaten our livelihood
With your godforsaken fuck shit
Got it?
Published 5th Oct 2018
| Edited 15th Jan 2024
Author's Note
A moment in time. A lesson learned. Be careful of the energies/entities you invite into your home. You can't be helpful to everyone even if a family member or longtime friend vouches for them DO YOUR OWN VETTING. Homewreckers come in all shapes and sizes. I almost lost my freedom behind this BS. I know the language is quite vulgar but that's how dark it got for me. I'll probably take it down after a couple of days. Just had to get this shit out for now. It was brewing so deep even after the years passed. It could have torn my marriage apart if he and i didn't see the same thing. IJS.
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Anonymous
5th Oct 2018 9:51am
Fuck! That is so powerful. Don't remove it. It loaded with the human condition.
Thank you so much!! Please understand I really don't like to reveal this side of me too often but somethings just sit on the soul like an anvil needing to be pushed off. Thank god for poetry and compassionate energy such as yours.
5th Oct 2018 11:16am
6th Oct 2018 7:13am
5th Oct 2018 8:27pm
Thank god for writing!! Really allows an outlet for the anger and frustration to flow. Raw and unchecked. This is real life.
Nice job.
Nice job.
6th Oct 2018 7:16am
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6th Oct 2018 1:33am
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6th Oct 2018 7:18am
6th Oct 2018 7:48am
6th Oct 2018 7:53am
That's some kind of pent up aggression leaking all over the page, so unique in that respect.
7th Oct 2018 10:23pm
Poetry is the safe space for this kind of energy.
Thank you for your thoughts.
Thank you for your thoughts.
3rd Nov 2018 4:00am
Redemption Road, dust settled down
Headlights shone, rusted sign leaving town... My Burdens Gone lyrics from a song I wrote a while back and when reading your poem which by the way is just so awesome it brougjt the tune to mind and me singing at an open mic. Love the darkness of the poem and also the light.
Headlights shone, rusted sign leaving town... My Burdens Gone lyrics from a song I wrote a while back and when reading your poem which by the way is just so awesome it brougjt the tune to mind and me singing at an open mic. Love the darkness of the poem and also the light.
3rd Nov 2018 7:01pm
18th Nov 2023 1:07am
This is honest, with a lil in your face and fuck you peppered in. I love it. Every word. Thanks for sharing this and leaving it so I could experience this. <3
15th Jan 2024 10:30am
Thank you so much for stopping by.
Sifting through older poems I realize I didn't respond
to some comments.
So once again..thank you...
Sifting through older poems I realize I didn't respond
to some comments.
So once again..thank you...
23rd Jan 2024 11:54pm
