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Smog
You had to be really good to cut
through the smog
of same sex loving women
coming from upstairs
otherwise the attitudes
alone
would have smacked you
down
upon entry
through the listless corridors
of the bar's first floor.
through the smog
of same sex loving women
coming from upstairs
otherwise the attitudes
alone
would have smacked you
down
upon entry
through the listless corridors
of the bar's first floor.
Published 4th Oct 2018
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5th Oct 2018 1:15am
Anonymous
5th Oct 2018 2:59pm
You are really insightful at this poetry malarkey.
