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Sleep (Haiku)
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Sleep (Haiku)
Evening consumes man
The secret dark hereafter
Runs all sound away
Written by
passionatepoet
Published
2nd Nov 2011
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Whitewand6
2nd Nov 2011 1:25am
Says so much at so many levels.
Despite the silence.
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passionatepoet
5th Nov 2011 9:46pm
Thanks :)
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Concise, splendid.
SamuelJWeaver
(Johnny Stefanski)
3rd Nov 2011 11:36pm
Just wonderful. Short as it is (obviously, it's a haiku), you manage to convey the power of the words you choose. They say a picture is worth 1000 words, and the picture you paint is vivid. Bravo.
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passionatepoet
5th Nov 2011 9:40pm
Thanks for your feedback...very much appreciated
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