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Haiku #7

I knew her as a
long winded bistro with fine
customer service.

Nari

Written by Nari

(Laura Jean)

Published 26th Sep 2018 | Edited 28th Sep 2018

#dating #haiku #lesbian #senryu #women

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Re. Haiku #7

26th Sep 2018 5:41pm

Nice metaphor - you are becoming senryu suprema here

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Re. Haiku #7

Nari (Laura Jean)

26th Sep 2018 5:47pm

I'm usually not good at responding to comments but thank you just the same.

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