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Last Stand
The argument has ended
Last words spoken
Tears begin to fall
The ostrich buries its head
In the sand
Last words spoken
Tears begin to fall
The ostrich buries its head
In the sand
Published 22nd Sep 2018
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22nd Sep 2018 5:08am
Short, powerful and sad. I'm perplexed by the ostrich: (1) The stubborn one, not changing their mind or stance and no longer listening, or (2) the frustrated one (tears) hopeless that nothing will change and hides from the despair. I guess the ostrich could be both depending on the point of view.
Felt emotion, had me thinking = excellent write.
Felt emotion, had me thinking = excellent write.
22nd Sep 2018 5:14am
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2018 6:14am
Very nice, Medinda!
You OK?
Matthew.
You OK?
Matthew.
22nd Sep 2018 6:44am
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2018 6:53am
So do I, thanks!
22nd Sep 2018 10:20am
22nd Sep 2018 10:26am
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2018 00:42am
The other that caused the poor ostrich to bury its head doesn't deserve any mention. I feel the pain and the need for silence and to hide. I truly feel it. Hugs J
23rd Sep 2018 12:30pm
The ostrich is actually both.
The stubborn ass who refuses to bend.
The sorrowful soul stuck in their pain.
They are both. They are unchangeable.
The stubborn ass who refuses to bend.
The sorrowful soul stuck in their pain.
They are both. They are unchangeable.
23rd Sep 2018 9:57pm
Strong ... declarative ... love the single lines ... steady beating cadence ... bravo my poetess ...
23rd Sep 2018 10:01pm
LilDragonfly, you are just the sweetest thing. I'm going to start calling you sugar..
23rd Sep 2018 10:04pm
23rd Sep 2018 10:05pm
