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Unity
Lost in prurient desires; an unrelenting ache stirs , impeding hardness on his masculinity. Though was his heart softened, wishing for her touch. Upon her lips did he wish to indulge; tongues entangled, ripping from her lungs; each ragged breath to then breathe it back. Her impassioned flesh luring that of his own. Around her body did he wish to coil himself; each consuipient and tender thought impaled and imprinted; mind and body equal. Settling upon each nuance of her femininity; his amorous hands called to venture. The plush feel of ivory skimming beneath his tongue as he coaxed all exasperation from her parted lips. To his mouth; pining for cascades of flowing jubilation. Absorbed and attuned, deaf to all but her whispers and every cry of need. Panged by his raw and lecherous need of unity - with her; to feel everything that she was. His yearning for synchronicity, their movements bleeding one into the next. Their pulsing beats conspiring between them; in her deepest recesses, his soul to then be spilled, and with it would his heart surely follow.
Published 21st Sep 2018
| Edited 13th Feb 2019
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21st Sep 2018 7:23am
21st Sep 2018 12:54pm
21st Sep 2018 2:55pm
love it Pandora...sensuality interwoven with primal emotional interaction...great stuff...
22nd Sep 2018 11:34pm
21st Sep 2018 4:06pm
What as blood pumping exciting write.... Full of energy and sexual prowess.... Very interesting and mouth watering
22nd Sep 2018 11:35pm
23rd Sep 2018 1:27am
you are very welcome.... Come around my way and maybe you will want to stay
21st Sep 2018 7:47pm
Brava Pandora! Your use of refined language elevates the sensualty of this wonderfully romantic piece especially for this word geek. This passage is a tingle-maker:
"Settling upon each nuance of her femininity; his amorous hands called to venture. The plush feel of ivory as it skimmed beneath his tongue,"
"Settling upon each nuance of her femininity; his amorous hands called to venture. The plush feel of ivory as it skimmed beneath his tongue,"
22nd Sep 2018 11:37pm
I can't thank you enough for such praise! Sometimes I squint before posting ;being such experience and talent far exceeds mine..
21st Sep 2018 11:09pm
22nd Sep 2018 11:38pm
Oh how you've brought a smile to my face. One which I needed too! Thank you as well for the add
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- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
23rd Sep 2018 9:13pm
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23rd Sep 2018 9:31pm
Anonymous
27th Sep 2018 8:38pm
Soooooo beautifully erotic
28th Sep 2018 2:13am
