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pencil
your like pencil
you write some good things
and sometimes bad
you can erase it
but you always leave
a stain
a mark of your mistake
that you cannot correct
you write some good things
and sometimes bad
you can erase it
but you always leave
a stain
a mark of your mistake
that you cannot correct
Published 21st Sep 2018
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21st Sep 2018 11:41am
Thank you for your entry in The Drunken Boat. Please remember to edit and select ArthurRimbaud in your themes.
The pencil indeed is a symble that can evoke power or pain within the perception of those who allow it.
Because you have requested honest critique, your should be either you're or you are in L1.
The pencil indeed is a symble that can evoke power or pain within the perception of those who allow it.
Because you have requested honest critique, your should be either you're or you are in L1.
21st Sep 2018 1:19pm
