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Coconut rhum

the skies had a thousand stars
 
as i look at my fresh made scar
 
i took the coconut rhum  
 
and drowned myself in it
 
as i listen to guitars and drums
 
and as i waited for a comfort to come
 
no one did
 
and i just sit
 
alone drinking this rhum
 
how i wish
 
i could bring back time
 
to take you back
 
you are once mine
Written by KGERICD (Kurt Geric Dili)
Published | Edited 23rd Nov 2018
Author's Note
its about a woman that i love
we had an accident
and she died
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