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BETH SAID HELLO
BETH SAID HELLO
I'm about as sober as sober can be
as Beth walked by me, ecstasy, next to me
bent over in fantastic reality
sent to hover over unrealistic fantasy
as soft pink lips released half-heard words
lifting drifting dripping sips sinking silently upwards
Eyes gaze into eyes as souls inspect souls
dissecting disguises behind mutual goals
.....Heaven a breath sent.....
.....Heaving a fresh scent.....
.....Death dead below.....
.....Beth said hello.....
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I'm about as sober as sober can be
as Beth walked by me, ecstasy, next to me
bent over in fantastic reality
sent to hover over unrealistic fantasy
as soft pink lips released half-heard words
lifting drifting dripping sips sinking silently upwards
Eyes gaze into eyes as souls inspect souls
dissecting disguises behind mutual goals
.....Heaven a breath sent.....
.....Heaving a fresh scent.....
.....Death dead below.....
.....Beth said hello.....
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Published 18th Sep 2018
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Beth
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19th Sep 2018 6:03pm
25th Sep 2018 1:12am
You fucken hit this on the ball. Metaphor painting the vivid pic. Nice Eyes gaze into eyes as souls inspect souls
dissecting disguises behind mutual goals
.....Heaven a breath sent.....
.....Heaving a fresh scent.....
.....Death dead below.....
.....Beth said hello.....
Hope she was good to you!!
dissecting disguises behind mutual goals
.....Heaven a breath sent.....
.....Heaving a fresh scent.....
.....Death dead below.....
.....Beth said hello.....
Hope she was good to you!!
25th Sep 2018 12:26pm
Damn right my brother. Keep kicking ass, Uncleslam man. and thank you for your comment
27th Sep 2018 7:16pm
Yeah I don't get the whole Beth said hello....
What Beth from the crack house?
The mysterious name of Beth that Vern kept on spouting off with when I was going through the issue with my kid....you wanted to spell some shit out please do cause I'm all ears....I never did anything to Beth. We were friends at on time.
What Beth from the crack house?
The mysterious name of Beth that Vern kept on spouting off with when I was going through the issue with my kid....you wanted to spell some shit out please do cause I'm all ears....I never did anything to Beth. We were friends at on time.
27th Sep 2018 7:16pm
3rd Oct 2018 7:30am
Bethany Edgewood is another of my psuedonames.;
I do what I can and will continue to do so
My name is a game with a name with no name
kicking ass in and within an endless game
I encourage you
to do the same
I do what I can and will continue to do so
My name is a game with a name with no name
kicking ass in and within an endless game
I encourage you
to do the same
3rd Oct 2018 8:52am
5th Oct 2018 1:46am
(i think a dizzy little girl has a hardcore crush on me., but, shhhhh. ................)
