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Oops, oversharing again
My own "emotional bullshit" distracts from the tasks at hand,
And your silence just magnifies its stench.
Frankly, I should know by now:
a sleeve is a stupid place to keep a heart,
And ghosts make terrible pen pals.
So, for all your convenience,
I guess I’ll just bury it in the kitty litter of my life
And try to get used to the odour.
And your silence just magnifies its stench.
Frankly, I should know by now:
a sleeve is a stupid place to keep a heart,
And ghosts make terrible pen pals.
So, for all your convenience,
I guess I’ll just bury it in the kitty litter of my life
And try to get used to the odour.
Published 17th Sep 2018
| Edited 18th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Lesson re-learned, over and over..... people don't really want to hear it.
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19th Sep 2018 1:51am
"Frankly, I should know by now:
a sleeve is a stupid place to keep a heart, "
indeed.
do that and ...suffer..the consequences
i get it.
good, the expression
blending excellent metaphor
always good to release.
a sleeve is a stupid place to keep a heart, "
indeed.
do that and ...suffer..the consequences
i get it.
good, the expression
blending excellent metaphor
always good to release.
19th Sep 2018 4:04am
I was pretty cranky when I wrote this.... and almost deleted it. But if I can't share it here, there's nowhere I can....
Thanks for taking the time.
Thanks for taking the time.
19th Sep 2018 12:39pm
good you did that...
both at 'that' moment and
when deciding against deleting...and yes
if not here then where else..
both at 'that' moment and
when deciding against deleting...and yes
if not here then where else..
