you lied

brutal and to the point, hope you find someone better hun x

thank you

you r on ur way to better things. Lessons learned. Released from drama u dont need in ur life. Karma will come soon enough. Watch

thanks and i hope so.

ur getting thru it by expressing ur true feeling bout it. It's better to let it out then keep it bottled up inside. Your self worth is way too precious to compromise for anyone thats not on the same level as u. keep ur head up! U'll see it soon enough. We are all here in life to witness and learn all kinds of lessons.

hello and welcome.

o.k i get that you have been burned and told it straight.
that is a good foundation to build on.

try to steer clear from the kind of sentencing you have put together and work on saying more with less.

i have given an example here to show you what might work better for you.
you are welcome to copy and paste if it is to your liking.
please don't mistake this as some kind of put down. i am merely trying to provide some help.


lies
when you spoke of love
lies
when you said forever

Now you question why we're through
as if you don't already know  
climbed in bed with my best friend
just tell me this one little thang

thanks for the help and ill try to saying more with less also ill work on the sentencing.~T~

Great poem really deep

thnaks.

extremely deep and full of rage and pain great job