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Broken
The column has cracked
All the way down
Below the foundation
Into the roots
It is unsteady
Unreliable in its duty
And the sadness is real
Such beauty and elegance
Created by the divine
Gone to pot
So early in life
With a slim chance of repair
And unfortunately
No possibility of replacing
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Published 6th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Medical problems
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6th Sep 2018 4:21pm
6th Sep 2018 6:39pm
6th Sep 2018 9:34pm
it's a beautiful sadness, feels like being comfortable being that sad !
i hope you will find the happiness you deserve !
beautiful piece :*
i hope you will find the happiness you deserve !
beautiful piece :*
6th Sep 2018 10:55pm
I voiced your words slowly and at times with emphasis as I read xmar and they do indeed paint a pervading sadness.
7th Sep 2018 4:08am
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