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Magic

Visual Poem Magic
Heart_symphony
Written by Heart_symphony
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Re. Magic
5th Sep 2018 6:38pm
That's why our emotions get crushed out of habit.
CasketSharpe
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Re: Re. Magic
5th Sep 2018 7:04pm
That sounds like it should be part of the poem
Heart_symphony
Re: Re. Magic
6th Sep 2018 10:17pm
There is nothing wrong with a little added flavor.
CasketSharpe
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Re. Magic
(PYGs Whisper)
6th Sep 2018 7:26pm
'cause we were climbing every hope we were given knowing it was made of Sahara sands easy to evanesce
PYGsWhisper
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