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Magic

Written by Heart_symphony

Published 5th Sep 2018

#depression #disappointment #loneliness #rejection #UnrequitedLove

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Re. Magic

5th Sep 2018 6:38pm

That's why our emotions get crushed out of habit.

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5th Sep 2018 7:04pm

That sounds like it should be part of the poem

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6th Sep 2018 10:17pm

There is nothing wrong with a little added flavor.

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Re. Magic

6th Sep 2018 7:26pm

'cause we were climbing every hope we were given knowing it was made of Sahara sands easy to evanesce

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