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Open Wound
My Face Is Bleeding
not blood
But the tears I shed
From the wounds of my eyes
Pouring Out My Pain
not blood
But the tears I shed
From the wounds of my eyes
Pouring Out My Pain
Published 5th Sep 2018
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
5th Sep 2018 8:00am
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5th Sep 2018 2:14pm
5th Sep 2018 12:45pm
5th Sep 2018 5:45pm
If it was out the pussy it would be called squirting. Overall very good write keep it up.
5th Sep 2018 5:58pm
5th Sep 2018 6:25pm
Write what you feel. It is one of the special qualities of a real writer. Try it. You may surprise yourself.
7th Sep 2018 8:20pm
i love the simplicity of this micropoem, , and i adore its bitterness that we can obviously feel and breathe !
awesome :*
awesome :*
7th Sep 2018 8:44pm
Thank you very much. It's how I felt, like the tears could have easily been blood from all the pain.
