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Hungry Eyes
Hungry Eyes
Tonight, no disguise
No lies, coveted passion, comes as no surprise
Shh…take my body pass the stars
Venus needing the erotic desires of Mars
Heavenly paradise beyond the word far
The element of awaited heated surprise
Release the hidden passion within, refusing to subside
Roam your palms over my body slowly, gentle, easy
Wet kisses pass my navel ring, to my inner thighs to thoroughly please me
A dip and then a thrusting slip inside
Palming your head, cupping my breast for the blissful tongue ride
Strong palms cupping my buttocks burying your nostrils in the warmth of my slit
Your angry tongue licking the soft flesh before, spanking my clit
Oh God, right there...oh...oh please don’t move
Your tongue in and out, piecing the core of my wicked pussy groove
Wildly moving my hips, no time to console
Kissing me senseless, illicit movements uncontrolled
Your dick circling on its own patrol
Yanking it out
Over my lips it rolls
“Mmmm, I did not mean to drain your dick handsome one under my covetous demise.”
Blame it on the hunger of my smoky gray eyes
I like this wish list and the naughty surprise
“You can shut the door on your way out love.”
Author's Note
Love is an ice cream sundae, with all the marvelous coverings. Sex is the cherry on top.
Jimmy Dean
Jimmy Dean
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2018 11:00am
Very very intriguing. I am looking forward to reading more of you. In the meantime, very nicely written. J
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5th Sep 2018 3:08pm
hey J,
i have read some of your poem and would like to ask if you would like to be part of my podcast .
what i do is voice over for poems with and stories , for now its more of erotics or abstract writing but i can make it sound very very sexy .
would love to hear from you .
i have read some of your poem and would like to ask if you would like to be part of my podcast .
what i do is voice over for poems with and stories , for now its more of erotics or abstract writing but i can make it sound very very sexy .
would love to hear from you .
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6th Sep 2018 00:34am
Thanks for taking the time to read and then commenting. Have a great evening as well.
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6th Sep 2018 00:54am
I need more details to understand what you have in mind to do and I will think about it and let you know. DM me. Thank you for your offer. J.
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9th Sep 2018 4:54am
Thanks for reading and then taking the time to comment. Have a great weekend as well.
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Wonderful sensuous write ... beautiful flow ... pulled me in never let me go ... even as I read and reread it ... welcome my poetess ...
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9th Sep 2018 4:50am
Why thank you for taking the time to read and then comment. Have a great weekend as well.
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8th Oct 2018 4:28am
You went all the way back to my first debut poem. Aww, that is so special. Thanks a million love. I hope you have a great Monday morning a well.
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22nd Oct 2018 6:13am
Bringing a nice little 80's to into a new modern age, wonder if Eric thought like that when writing the tune. Well done for another one with a great soundtrack.
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21st Mar 2019 1:56am
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, enjoy your evening as well
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Re. Hungry Eyes
6th Aug 2020 7:28pm
I'm looking into the hungry eyes and I want to feed them with everything I got. I'm happy because your words are an aphrodisiac to me. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen.
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7th Aug 2020 1:36am
Come closer my love.. at..at..look me in my smokey eyes.. hands roaming downward.. now lean in and whisper something, sweet, seductive in my ear and softly lick over my earlobe ..mm.. you feel that heated lust.. and thank you for reading and then commenting. Have a great evening you and a sweet TGIF.. on me.. wink
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23rd Jan 2021 6:26pm
Even though time has passed, there is still hunger in your eyes.
Excellent poem.
Excellent poem.
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23rd Jan 2021 11:58pm
Only when you glaze down into them my love.. I called out to the stars for you, I do miss the soft alliance of our midnight grooves, I will always feel your heartbeats, rather I am bent, spent, or if we are hugged up together, keeping warm in a tent.. mmm... you take care my wandering poet, and the next hotel suite shall be on you, and I prefer unclothed... wink😘
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I could say this reminds me of the Eric Carmen song, “Hungry Eyes”, but only the title as I don’t really like the tune.
I enjoyed trying to see if the rhyme scheme would be consistent. Here you have broadened the definition of “the urgency of now”, gently amplified by the last line, “You can shut the door on your way out love”.
I enjoyed trying to see if the rhyme scheme would be consistent. Here you have broadened the definition of “the urgency of now”, gently amplified by the last line, “You can shut the door on your way out love”.
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5th Sep 2021 10:26pm
You have made me feel so special, because as of yesterday I celebrated three years on DUP, and I be darn you have commented on my first posted poem.. thank you you have made my day my King
In essence please enjoy yours.. and have a safe holiday and a pleasant week
In essence please enjoy yours.. and have a safe holiday and a pleasant week
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28th Jan 2024 6:53pm
Decided to go back to your very 1st post here. You have many poems and your writing is exquisite. You have the ability to write anything with ease. This erotic poem is sensual, sexy, hot, a turn on and should be read by all.
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28th Jan 2024 7:09pm
Ahh.. thank you for taking the time to read my first posted poem here and the many years following my works of art, thank you and the words are very much appreciated.
Enjoy your Sunday evening and have a blessed upcoming week,
Enjoy your Sunday evening and have a blessed upcoming week,
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28th Jan 2024 8:45pm