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Life Music
Straight out of the south a new rapper on the scene
Deep underground not quite mainstream
Impacting the game and showing what real rap should be
Never flipped a bird by still so street
Opening the eyes of the world with this life music
Uncovering the truth that's disguised by these fake rappers bullshit
Sorry for the language just tryna keep it real for you and me
A young savior to the game remember the name Prodigy
That's why I keep spittin' there words and spittin' these rhymes
Another day another time to write another hit line
So open your ears and your eyes and get to know this cold world
Because its not all about money, drugs, and sex with another girl
Deep underground not quite mainstream
Impacting the game and showing what real rap should be
Never flipped a bird by still so street
Opening the eyes of the world with this life music
Uncovering the truth that's disguised by these fake rappers bullshit
Sorry for the language just tryna keep it real for you and me
A young savior to the game remember the name Prodigy
That's why I keep spittin' there words and spittin' these rhymes
Another day another time to write another hit line
So open your ears and your eyes and get to know this cold world
Because its not all about money, drugs, and sex with another girl
Published 29th Oct 2011
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29th Oct 2011 10:31am
I'll be curious to learn just what it is you intend to offer us in lieu of drugs, money and sex.
For you, this may serve as a passable introduction to your work although you would be unwise to neglect the basics, however much freedom you consider your favoured style deserves.
I hate to be a grammar slammer but there is a world of difference between there & their, which any rapper worth his nappy must swallow along with the rest of us.
Keep 'em coming
Best ~ Abra
For you, this may serve as a passable introduction to your work although you would be unwise to neglect the basics, however much freedom you consider your favoured style deserves.
I hate to be a grammar slammer but there is a world of difference between there & their, which any rapper worth his nappy must swallow along with the rest of us.
Keep 'em coming
Best ~ Abra
29th Oct 2011 3:53pm
I preciate the honesty...as for the there it was suppose to be "these" I guess that's what I get for typing this with my phone but still I see where you coming from
1st Nov 2011 9:53pm
1st Nov 2011 11:51pm
