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Today Without A Day
Today, John Smith
failed to start his day.
He placed blame squarely on the day
and swiftly made a play for, yet, another day...
To no avail;
that day's slots were all booked up!
- Day slots are, really, going fast -
John Smith, today,
is left without a day...
failed to start his day.
He placed blame squarely on the day
and swiftly made a play for, yet, another day...
To no avail;
that day's slots were all booked up!
- Day slots are, really, going fast -
John Smith, today,
is left without a day...
Published 14th Aug 2018
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14th Aug 2018 4:51pm
John Smith appears to have reached the bargaining stage...
only one aspect of grieving...
does he grieve for himself... or another?
is that why he's fading into the woodwork, I wonder? Ely
only one aspect of grieving...
does he grieve for himself... or another?
is that why he's fading into the woodwork, I wonder? Ely
17th Aug 2018 4:10pm
2nd Sep 2018 8:44pm
Very direct and human on man’s ability to waste time; I like the rhyme-play and honesty of it
2nd Sep 2018 10:15pm
