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brother wolf
the river giggled
as it wound its way downstream
its belly tickled
by pebbles, while it was on its way
the sun smiled at the delightful scene
letting out a sigh
the Earth was singing to the human race
some were in tune with her music some were not
mother Moon chatted to the sun
they had lots to talk about they were in love
brother wolf howls his hello
his pack members join in
soon it's a melodic chorus
their Native family dance to
howling back at the wolves
for they are sacred clan members
the grass under their feet rejoices
to be part of the ceremony
all mother nature is in unison
it's a great celebration of the senses
Written by
smackdownraven
Published 9th Aug 2018
Author's Note
for sounds of happiness comp.
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Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 7:38am
thank you beautiful Sweet One
I was trying to find harmony here...
love me
I was trying to find harmony here...
love me
Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 7:54am
On how nature makes us all be with smiles
You've found smiles with this write
You've found smiles with this write
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Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 7:56am
thank you beautiful Rose a lot of joy in this write I found my smiles put away saved for this moment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 8:14am
you helped me find those giggles tonight with your view of my kind of ugly poem earlier thank you beautiful :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 8:19am
Aren't giggles just Ahh sigh
Happy to pass on the giggles to one so
Beautiful Brenda 😆
Happy to pass on the giggles to one so
Beautiful Brenda 😆
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Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 8:23am
Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 11:29am
thank you graciously dearest Tim i'm so happy you liked this one... it made my heart happy writing it...
love Brenda :)
love Brenda :)
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Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 2:01pm
thank you graciously dearest Bender I think I was influenced by watching the Yellowstone documentary about the wolves and Native American peoples there...
I deeply appreciate your visit...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate your visit...
love Brenda
Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 4:06pm
Very sweet poem Raven. A happy fairy tale of nature. Good luck for the comp.
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Re: Re. brother wolf
9th Aug 2018 6:21pm
thank you dearest Angel for feeling the magic of this one...
love Raven aka Crim
love Raven aka Crim
Re. brother wolf
10th Aug 2018 1:42am
Re. brother wolf
13th Aug 2018 2:32am
"brother wolf howls his hello
his pack members join in
soon it's a melodic chorus
their Native family dance to"
yes we are in unison...a chorus of individual howls
here expressed in beautiful lines
Jeff
his pack members join in
soon it's a melodic chorus
their Native family dance to"
yes we are in unison...a chorus of individual howls
here expressed in beautiful lines
Jeff
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