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Weathered kiss extends beyond the mist,
Smokes from raging errant blaze.
Hard within, engulfed in rapture’s vice,
Pull that seeks to empty want.
Warm disclose, the gate devouring,
Secret feeds the waves below.
Nails that dig, in blood and flesh betray,
Howls of twin wolves finding moon.
Published 5th Aug 2018
| Edited 6th Aug 2018
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Thinking really hard...
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Out of the poems I have come across, yours speaks most to my logophilia. Most of these people don't understand how to use words erotically. I am so glad I came across yours. Can I get a synapsis?
7th Aug 2018 3:20pm
Thank you for the kind reception of my small poem... I have always found that I enjoy writing my poetry when I say something by saying something completely different. I am glad you enjoy my veiled meanings.
geoff
geoff
Pull that seeks to empty want... I love that. Is this an ode to hypersexuality? That line speaks very much to a poem I wrote about my addiction... Lust without meaning, meaning without connection; my brittle innocence soiled by a lack of affection.
