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[b][b]YOURS
My hearts afire
With burning desire
I need you to quench this flame
I'm holding you close
As the momentum grows
And I'm screaming and moaning your name
Nails digging in
You're penetrating
Bouncing up and down on my frame
Your hitting my spot
Damn it's getting hot
As you decide to redirect your aim
I see the intensity
As you're staring down at me
And I realize this is not a game
You're here to let me know
that no other man can ever go
In the pussy in which you just came[/b][/b]
Published 26th Oct 2011
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26th Oct 2011 6:05am
"You're here to let me know
that no other man can ever go
In the pussy in which you just came"
I like the 3 line rhyme scheme. Creates an interesting rhythm.
I like your style : )
that no other man can ever go
In the pussy in which you just came"
I like the 3 line rhyme scheme. Creates an interesting rhythm.
I like your style : )
26th Oct 2011 6:56am
26th Oct 2011 6:32am
a new style
a new touch
a new vibe
i likes it much
a consistent msg
a consistent flo
a consistent gem
dats always da best way 2 go....;)
a new touch
a new vibe
i likes it much
a consistent msg
a consistent flo
a consistent gem
dats always da best way 2 go....;)
26th Oct 2011 6:58am
TX!!!! Just thought I would try something new and ended up liking it very much. And btw ... Im digging ur style too ;-)
26th Oct 2011 7:14am
i really dont hav a style....i rite n a variety of ways....lol....but im glad u like it....;)
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