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In the Grass
Your thirsty bones, insatiate sand.
All that is life glistens down
those spacious cheeks,
Spilling over blades of lash.
Your Auricle-fed, adventitiously perfect, root
is this 'every moment of life'.
And the light of your brightness shines.
Published 27th Jul 2018
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27th Jul 2018 3:01am
Stunning, Oshinome. Solid poetry that'll take root.
They say poetry expands from one dimension into another through the poet. I say great poetry is a dandelion seeding verse, that in turn seeds, that in turn seeds. . .and so on.
For centuries it ripples the air we breathe, and for those who seek, blesses our searching with truth.
They say poetry expands from one dimension into another through the poet. I say great poetry is a dandelion seeding verse, that in turn seeds, that in turn seeds. . .and so on.
For centuries it ripples the air we breathe, and for those who seek, blesses our searching with truth.
12th Aug 2018 8:53pm
Nicely written, Oshinome! The words you've chosen depicted an otherworldly and desirable imagery as we are utterly dependent on this giver of life.
Thank you for participating in my competition!
Thank you for participating in my competition!
