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Rings Of Love
Crazy, a seduction held tight
as love drips into a barren heart
molten rings amid stolen nights
forever, how you do fool
a regal regret
two lovers beget
feelings used as a tool
Infatuation, cocksure,
inviting and ego inflating
replacing damnation
life was given a voice
foiled in choice
or failure by chance
bottles blurring romance
wild rides chasing the stars
waking up bloddied and barred
no looking up
tops spinning down
the cycle kept going round
forgiveness found in foreign lips
comforting words, tied up and tongued
a late night tryst where love just insists
on not letting go
as tonights and tomorrows are one
•but you let go•
and now crazy,
what's next to show
as love drips into a barren heart
molten rings amid stolen nights
forever, how you do fool
a regal regret
two lovers beget
feelings used as a tool
Infatuation, cocksure,
inviting and ego inflating
replacing damnation
life was given a voice
foiled in choice
or failure by chance
bottles blurring romance
wild rides chasing the stars
waking up bloddied and barred
no looking up
tops spinning down
the cycle kept going round
forgiveness found in foreign lips
comforting words, tied up and tongued
a late night tryst where love just insists
on not letting go
as tonights and tomorrows are one
•but you let go•
and now crazy,
what's next to show
Written by
JusTim_
Published 24th Jul 2018
| Edited 25th Jul 2018
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Re. Rings Of Love
24th Jul 2018 11:02pm
Again the masterful rhyme ... awesome flow with this one JT ... loved the closing line ...
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25th Jul 2018 3:30am
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2018 4:25am
a whirlwind of words
woven ...
I`m at a loss
for words ...
~Devlin
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25th Jul 2018 12:29pm
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25th Jul 2018 4:42pm
Hauntingly beautiful. I sense glimpses of hope darting in and out.
I loved it.
Always Justafan
I loved it.
Always Justafan
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2018 3:02pm
It's like watching bubbles float on a breeze. Some burst and others remain, hopeful and contained. Your writing is never what one expects. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Rings Of Love
26th Jul 2018 3:07pm
Thank you dear. I'll take that as a compliment as my muse is all over the place when emotions start to run.