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Blue Sea Whales

Deep shadow forcing rippled surface wake;
defying gravity great blow ships sail,
leaping open water turn sideways break,
splash monolithic lunging blue sea whales.

Whales song ping chords oceanic serenade,
mates hear shrill bare raspy choral rounds,
notes long loud song orchestral thoughts pervade,
clasp hearts fins dart strumming tonal sounds

receding home exposing lone willfulness;
behemoth strength, unnerving length, fanning tail
inspiring dreams, mammoth scenes peacefulness,
retiring sun, peripheral moonlit
blue sea whales.
Written by CaptainCur
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