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The Forest Will Speak
Shed the light, breath of chaos, slayer reached for the sword, shallow words burned on her stake, the trees creek as they release their brown leaves to the wind,
Silent shrieks of fear, the underworld howls through the cracks of earth, burden of being chosen never felt so heavy, the sun burns orange embers through the forest,
Night will be the hour the forest will speak.
Silent shrieks of fear, the underworld howls through the cracks of earth, burden of being chosen never felt so heavy, the sun burns orange embers through the forest,
Night will be the hour the forest will speak.
Published 18th Jul 2018
| Edited 19th Jul 2018
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18th Jul 2018 11:19pm
i really like this ben :-) you are very good at writing around the theme of nature and i think these are my favourite ones from you ..
i liked every word....
i liked every word....
19th Jul 2018 7:17pm
Thanks glad you enjoyed it I felt liked trying something a bit different.
19th Jul 2018 8:23am
19th Jul 2018 7:18pm
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
19th Jul 2018 9:51am
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Hey Melia, thanks for reading and your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
4th Sep 2018 6:06am
I get a very Tolkien feel from this, and it works well. I was also reminded of In The Time Of Fires over on Jade’s poems. Very well done
4th Sep 2018 8:26pm
Thanks I feel very honoured by this comment I am a fan of Lord of the rings although I've never seen it as a massive influence but Tolkien is a great writer.
Thanks again for your comment.
Thanks again for your comment.
31st Dec 2018 6:14am
As a nature enthusiast and a metal head, I tell enjoyed this one. I really like the way you write! Check out my poems too if you get a chance!
17th Mar 2019 8:56pm
Thanks jimmyos for the complaints i will definitely check out some of your stuff
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