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Float
When you stop struggling you float.
That's what they say.
We struggle to make it.
We struggle for love.
Life is a struggle.
What does it mean to float?
The gentle breath from a lover
on your neck?
That few dollars that remain
when all your bills are paid?
Are you floating right now
while you're writing?
Or is that a struggle too?
That's what they say.
We struggle to make it.
We struggle for love.
Life is a struggle.
What does it mean to float?
The gentle breath from a lover
on your neck?
That few dollars that remain
when all your bills are paid?
Are you floating right now
while you're writing?
Or is that a struggle too?
Published 15th Jul 2018
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15th Jul 2018 7:59am
To be able to have that contentment you express in the middle verse. Two basic facets of happiness here, to enjoy another's love and live in your means would be an achievement for many.
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