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Between me and the Universe
Gimme love
Gimme love
Gimme love...open it up and dump it on me
The whole fuckin' thing...pour it out
On me
Before I'm out of aces
Before the game is up
Before I go empty
Pour it the fuck on me
So I can go and spread it
Before the curtain falls
Before the stage grows silent
Gimme love....
Gimme love
Gimme love...open it up and dump it on me
The whole fuckin' thing...pour it out
On me
Before I'm out of aces
Before the game is up
Before I go empty
Pour it the fuck on me
So I can go and spread it
Before the curtain falls
Before the stage grows silent
Gimme love....
Published 7th Jul 2018
| Edited 8th Jul 2018
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7th Jul 2018 9:34pm
8th Jul 2018 4:00am
I can almost hear it to music...
It's got real Punch... very nice work Ange.
Just one itty bitty thing?
... In Lines four... and nine?
the word you want is POUR...
those homophonic words can be difficult to deal with. Love ya, Ely
.
It's got real Punch... very nice work Ange.
Just one itty bitty thing?
... In Lines four... and nine?
the word you want is POUR...
those homophonic words can be difficult to deal with. Love ya, Ely
.
8th Jul 2018 4:02am
Yes, there was music too...in the background...a spark. You got it!
Thanks for the correction. It is taken care off.
Thanks for the correction. It is taken care off.
8th Jul 2018 6:12am
7th Jul 2018 11:29pm
8th Jul 2018 4:04am
7th Jul 2018 11:43pm
dearest Angel a prayer I can understand
powerful heartfelt outpouring..
love Raven
powerful heartfelt outpouring..
love Raven
8th Jul 2018 4:08am
8th Jul 2018 5:13am
8th Jul 2018 7:43am
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