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Lovers
Flesh so sweetly cradled in flesh,
two lovers bare and exposed
No spoken words conveyed,
their thoughts so gently flowed
Aligned in perfect unison,
they worshipped and adored
The anchor of their souls cast over,
as their love so sweetly poured
two lovers bare and exposed
No spoken words conveyed,
their thoughts so gently flowed
Aligned in perfect unison,
they worshipped and adored
The anchor of their souls cast over,
as their love so sweetly poured
Published 4th Jul 2018
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4th Jul 2018 5:25pm
loved the rhyme, the sentiment, the image....the warmsensuality appeals to my taurean nature...
6th Jul 2018 00:57am
Anonymous
5th Jul 2018 1:41am
Beautifully constructed and excellently executed in the closing stance. A true hymn to the most beautiful act of creation: love as reciprocal give and take, true union of bodies that complete each other, fitting in to place. Excellent ink my dear. J.
6th Jul 2018 00:59am
You always have the most beautiful substance to your comments that I really appreciate!. It is very much so the most beautiful act indeed!
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jul 2018 1:34am
6th Jul 2018 1:33am
I'm honoured by your words my dear. Thank you. But you use some of the most beautiful words describing your emotions and sharing them with us. I truly appreciate your work. If a poem makes me feel what is described, I know it is good. You are very passionate in your poems. That gives me pleasure and allows me to dream. That's what a good poet must do. And you do it magnificently. X J.
6th Jul 2018 2:15am
