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Torn appart (collaboration with skinnyjean)
Collaboration with me i_like_blue_eyes and skinnyjean
Torn appart:
Blinded by a moment
Shattered by a dream
Taken appart endless
Tethered at the seams
Graced upon with grazes
Terrified and weak
Compare them to the flawless
Subtle and unique
Breathe it in
Till the lung
Tissues scarred
Hyperventilating
Trying too hard
Tell me that I'm broken
How nice of you to notice
I already knew that.
But thank you for the insight....
Torn appart:
Blinded by a moment
Shattered by a dream
Taken appart endless
Tethered at the seams
Graced upon with grazes
Terrified and weak
Compare them to the flawless
Subtle and unique
Breathe it in
Till the lung
Tissues scarred
Hyperventilating
Trying too hard
Tell me that I'm broken
How nice of you to notice
I already knew that.
But thank you for the insight....
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