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Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
Soft ocean breeze, much noise around drowning it out, mindless chatter on the table next to me, high pitch voices squeeking, my body feels sticky from the heat, somewhere a table saw screams, I suck on my vaporizer, cheap nicotine juice tastes like incense, the coffee is long cold, waiting for my laundry in the dryer, feeling underlayer of anger, to much shit going on lately, lots of deception, the need to be on high alert in all my interactions, I smell too many rats, navigation skills required, boomer this and thats, not my generation, what the fuck happened to them anyway?,
that's the ones with the high pitch voices and the mindless chatter on the table next to me, god deliver me....from that...cough...why don't you all take your dish washers...your shower curtains...your nick nacks and doilies...your Prozac...your Costco and all the rest of it and shove it up your ass...I am not to be fucked with these days...get me the hell outa here!
that's the ones with the high pitch voices and the mindless chatter on the table next to me, god deliver me....from that...cough...why don't you all take your dish washers...your shower curtains...your nick nacks and doilies...your Prozac...your Costco and all the rest of it and shove it up your ass...I am not to be fucked with these days...get me the hell outa here!
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This is as good as I can do right now
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Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
29th Jun 2018 8:29pm
dearest Angel I can feel your utter annoyance
at the people and offensive noises..
got me irked too just reading of it..
excellent..
love Raven
at the people and offensive noises..
got me irked too just reading of it..
excellent..
love Raven
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29th Jun 2018 8:34pm
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29th Jun 2018 8:35pm
Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
29th Jun 2018 9:05pm
Re: Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
29th Jun 2018 9:38pm
I recently listened to some outstanding German satire, tried to write one in english, but because of differences in humor, language and culture, it didn't work. I wish I could air my anger in a more satirical way with the english language, but it seems to end up being silly. Sometimes a stream of conciousness sais it better.
Thanks for reading and commenting
Best
A.
Thanks for reading and commenting
Best
A.
Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
29th Jun 2018 9:39pm
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29th Jun 2018 9:41pm
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29th Jun 2018 9:50pm
Fucking A
My issues are with motorized, bikes, scooters, roller blades, every fucking thing on the sidewalk that shouldn't !!
My issues are with motorized, bikes, scooters, roller blades, every fucking thing on the sidewalk that shouldn't !!
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Re: Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
29th Jun 2018 10:03pm
Ohhhhh, I should send you the satire piece I wrote about the bicycle riders on narrow mountain roads. Sling shot time...I have to type it on my laptop later. In German it would be much more fierce, but there we don't have the self righteous bike pricks that wiggle their silicone padded spandex asses right in front of your windscreen, blocking the whole road.
Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
29th Jun 2018 10:21pm
Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
Hoo Boy !... I know wherefore you speak...
I think, 'thoroughly pissed off,' is going around this week... like some kind of nasty virus.
You got that accross, Big Time... gauging by the response.
All in all, I think you've got a great little poem there. Ely
I think, 'thoroughly pissed off,' is going around this week... like some kind of nasty virus.
You got that accross, Big Time... gauging by the response.
All in all, I think you've got a great little poem there. Ely
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Re: Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
30th Jun 2018 00:05am
Thanx Ely...I didn't even try hard...just tried to keep out of trouble while waiting. Baracuda Bob's is always a rather challenging experience for me.
Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
30th Jun 2018 00:15am
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Thank you Tim. I am surprised how many folks feel the resonance....you just never know...
Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
30th Jun 2018 1:38pm
well...cuts it nicely
through all the 'noise', that you were able to write this
is commendable.
through all the 'noise', that you were able to write this
is commendable.
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Re: Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
2nd Jul 2018 10:51pm
I go inside and become observer. Instead of blowing up I channel the emotion into writing. Most of the time it works...
Re. Stream of conciousness....at the laundromat
Anonymous
12th Jul 2018 8:14pm
lol, so get it... your sarcasm is a wave of enlightenment
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12th Jul 2018 8:19pm