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Fall On Me (revised)

(thanks for the advice beautiful_accident, i hope i used it right though.)


It's descending down,
falling like a curtain,
black,
not red,
this is my stage.
In front of the world,
I act,
like it's not coming down.
not blocking my view,
not taking them away,
it doesn't mute out sound,
and lock me in a world of gray.

falling down,
closer everyday.
Suffocating,
agonizing,
tormenting.
feeling dead.

I'm the zombie,
a silent shadow along the wall.
my stage is dimming,
lights of many shining through,
and I can't even reach out.
Someone come for me,
someone save me.
It falls,
my gray clouds.
My black heavy curtain,
and locks me away,
never hitting the bottom.

And I wait,
never ending time,
for that day,
when it touches the floor,
and there's no curtain call for me.
Nothing but blank eternity.

Fall,
Fall,
Fall on me.
Written by Karrabear (Question)
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