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Sanctuary Of Replay
wrote the book
never published -
held it
in closet dust
for seven years
took it out
read it
for seven years
in closet dust
held it
never published -
wrote the book
read it
took it out
-x-
Published 24th Jun 2018
| Edited 25th Jun 2018
Author's Note
(Sometimes a past, is a past - for a reason)
Entered in this comp:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10282/#426542
Entered in this comp:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10282/#426542
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24th Jun 2018 8:44pm
TBH... This is metaphorical
You should look at some of these self publish orgs.
It was time to burn it, in my case.
Thanks for popping in bro
Al
P.S. thanx for the edit, tip! It is better as a author note.
24th Jun 2018 8:53pm
Anonymous
24th Jun 2018 11:28pm
Never
Ever
Ever
Ever
Ever
Ever
Ever
give up on your dreams.
My dear, life is terribly short for the shoulda-woulda-couldas. No more of them. So take that frown and that clown and turn it upside down before I have to march over there and tread on some balls.
(Note: meant in the most well meaning way. I’ve never been terribly good at subtle...😂)
-M
Ever
Ever
Ever
Ever
Ever
Ever
give up on your dreams.
My dear, life is terribly short for the shoulda-woulda-couldas. No more of them. So take that frown and that clown and turn it upside down before I have to march over there and tread on some balls.
(Note: meant in the most well meaning way. I’ve never been terribly good at subtle...😂)
-M
26th Jun 2018 8:33pm
Thank you Missus.
Though this really is a metaphore... Much like you "wrote the book when it comes to burning wood"
I so appreciate that you aren't good at subtle... The world is inundated with it and none know quite how to deal with it.
Thank you for your words my friend
Bluest skies at ja
Al
Though this really is a metaphore... Much like you "wrote the book when it comes to burning wood"
I so appreciate that you aren't good at subtle... The world is inundated with it and none know quite how to deal with it.
Thank you for your words my friend
Bluest skies at ja
Al
26th Jun 2018 1:07pm
and the 'book' that started it all ;)
this was perfect to start that comp thread, short, mysterious, ambiguous and it's going to be exciting how the subject will be transformed by the end of the comp.
On personal level, if its a true account of an unpublished book know that either way its a success, just the fact that you keep creating art daily, translating every thing around you in a beautiful and extraordinary language is a gift.
this was perfect to start that comp thread, short, mysterious, ambiguous and it's going to be exciting how the subject will be transformed by the end of the comp.
On personal level, if its a true account of an unpublished book know that either way its a success, just the fact that you keep creating art daily, translating every thing around you in a beautiful and extraordinary language is a gift.
26th Jun 2018 8:35pm
Thank you Layla.
I appreciate your kindness and wonderful comment.
Blue Skies at you, friend
Al
=)
I appreciate your kindness and wonderful comment.
Blue Skies at you, friend
Al
=)
Anonymous
11th Jul 2018 2:38pm
To take lines and write them so cleverly that they can be reversed and still make sense...that's impressive! I can't do that to save my ass and I'm much in awe of your pen here.
...Willow
...Willow
