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Instinct
I sometimes wonder what he's thinking when
My tongue is pressed against him; and his hand
Is pushing round my head; so, that I blend
With him more deeply than I'd hoped; he's planned
His actions well before, I do not doubt;
Or, is it simply instinct to control
The depth of my depravity? I'll pout
To kiss his anal rim and, then, his hole;
And he will celebrate - a little moan
Followed by grunts of pleasure, as my tongue
Explores his (well-washed) anus; he will own
My every flicking movement 'til he's done
With slow masturbation, as I wonder
If he will come right now or seek more plunder...
My tongue is pressed against him; and his hand
Is pushing round my head; so, that I blend
With him more deeply than I'd hoped; he's planned
His actions well before, I do not doubt;
Or, is it simply instinct to control
The depth of my depravity? I'll pout
To kiss his anal rim and, then, his hole;
And he will celebrate - a little moan
Followed by grunts of pleasure, as my tongue
Explores his (well-washed) anus; he will own
My every flicking movement 'til he's done
With slow masturbation, as I wonder
If he will come right now or seek more plunder...
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Re. Instinct
23rd Jun 2018 1:38pm
Still like your style, Lady... very much.
Pray tell, do you ever indulge in writing for the lovers of the less extreme? Ta... Ely
Pray tell, do you ever indulge in writing for the lovers of the less extreme? Ta... Ely
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Yes I do - but tend to share those on other fora - as people seem less interested in them here - I have written some love and dark poetry here and a couple of semi social commentaries too - but people seem to enjoy eroticism most.
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23rd Jun 2018 4:30pm
Re. Instinct
23rd Jun 2018 2:45pm
''as my tongue
Explores his (well-washed) anus;''
i couldn't help but laugh right here
limits to depravity indeed i think
even the most brazen acts of sex you scribe with
a unique tact
Explores his (well-washed) anus;''
i couldn't help but laugh right here
limits to depravity indeed i think
even the most brazen acts of sex you scribe with
a unique tact
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23rd Jun 2018 3:00pm
Laughter each day
helps you love, lust and lay...
Glad you enjoyed the giggle, sir - and thank you for the praise
helps you love, lust and lay...
Glad you enjoyed the giggle, sir - and thank you for the praise
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23rd Jun 2018 4:02pm
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23rd Jun 2018 6:16pm
My point of view, sir
is simply for you, sir
But, of course, you knew that all the time!
You're a reader who lusts,
Knowing this girl adjusts,
Her perspectives to theirs in her rhyme...
is simply for you, sir
But, of course, you knew that all the time!
You're a reader who lusts,
Knowing this girl adjusts,
Her perspectives to theirs in her rhyme...
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23rd Jun 2018 8:30pm
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23rd Jun 2018 8:35pm
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23rd Jun 2018 6:10pm
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23rd Jun 2018 6:25pm
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23rd Jun 2018 8:36pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2018 8:11pm
Nothing more beautiful than pleasure in this world. It's the reason all things move. Life would make no sense, nor would it be worth living otherwise. Great ink as always dear Sweet Oblivion. Enjoyed as I was dreaming with eyes wide open. Well done.

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23rd Jun 2018 8:39pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2018 9:03pm
May very well be. This way i know exactly what I'm looking for. :)

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23rd Jun 2018 9:08pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2018 10:23pm
Forgive my ignorance my dear Sweet Oblivion, could you please translate that for me. I truly am confused. Thank you J.

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23rd Jun 2018 11:50pm
Re. Instinct
23rd Jun 2018 8:32pm
Have you been reading my dirty mind? This is very hot and right up my...street.
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23rd Jun 2018 8:34pm
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23rd Jun 2018 8:38pm
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23rd Jun 2018 8:40pm
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2018 2:58am
Good lawwwwwd SO....oh the sensations and tingles you can bring me while reading your lines...you’re killing me!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn

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15th Jul 2018 6:03pm