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Your pages stare naked before me
waiting for me to tell you what to say
for everyone who spreads you open to see
marked with dark turning returning eternity
sinking in truth and lustrous lies
thinking aloof as the ink dries....
Take your time and free your mind
forever believe and breathe luck like a wiz
but remember that there always is a deadline
you just never know when the Fuck it is....
Your pages stare naked before me
waiting for me to tell you what to say
for everyone who spreads you open to see
marked with dark turning returning eternity
sinking in truth and lustrous lies
thinking aloof as the ink dries....
Take your time and free your mind
forever believe and breathe luck like a wiz
but remember that there always is a deadline
you just never know when the Fuck it is....
Published 17th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Yeah, my apologies, I put this under extreme content only because I used the word Fuck. But that isn't going to change. Fuck the world-
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17th Jun 2018 2:52pm
love your expressions dear Poet
and your delivery raw and straight
at least that's how this reader receives it.
yes...we never know when the fuck it indeed is.
and your delivery raw and straight
at least that's how this reader receives it.
yes...we never know when the fuck it indeed is.
17th Jun 2018 4:44pm
Good rhyme and short way to say what you want to say. I like the inevitability of it.
Your "fuck" is well placed.
Your "fuck" is well placed.
18th Jun 2018 2:05pm
You know I love your work , my friend ;
Well penned again !
Yet , in my strange mind , I immediately went to
"Deadman With A Deadline"
Already what we call "dead" , and in some limbo ,
furiously writing , trying to finish some manuscript
before the deadline of reincarnation arrives...;)
( that could be a hell )
Fuck !
Well penned again !
Yet , in my strange mind , I immediately went to
"Deadman With A Deadline"
Already what we call "dead" , and in some limbo ,
furiously writing , trying to finish some manuscript
before the deadline of reincarnation arrives...;)
( that could be a hell )
Fuck !
25th Jun 2018 7:47am
22nd Aug 2018 10:44pm
MAKE IT HAPPEN!!!!!!!! or not. Do something !!!!!! or don't. ..;...but write and publish something.....
or don't. Keep a velocity pen and a paper pad on your physical soul at all times for the notes and quotes and the rhyme
during smoking toking break time. Or eat a donut and talk to that dumb fuck chick Who thinks she's in charge and thinks her clit is actually a dick
or don't. Keep a velocity pen and a paper pad on your physical soul at all times for the notes and quotes and the rhyme
during smoking toking break time. Or eat a donut and talk to that dumb fuck chick Who thinks she's in charge and thinks her clit is actually a dick
9th Jul 2019 1:43am
