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Divine Immersion
''you soak
in your temple
as in my mental..totally''
~~~~~
believe me when
i tell you
how i often envision you
my exotic tropic girl
laced in a shade of
the smoothest cinnamon
alone..secluded..in a space
of your making
sacred and candlelit with magik
scented exactly to your liking
where movements
of the world cease to exist
as talented digits
dive beneath the tantalizing tease
of opaque bubbly
into your haunted crease
working to ease the grooves of
a moistened slit
seeking inner peace
one..two...fingers at a time
maybe more perhaps
depending on how the mood goes
how the muzik flows
how the tempo grows steadily
in tune with bodily
intuition
as
smothering heat washes
over your anatomy
in a sequence of telling tsunamis
thickening the ambiance
in your realm of erotic solitude
graced by a welcoming interlude
of a pressured palming..a deep cupping
up into your grail
calming wails into whimpers
as legs sail further apart
in honor of a tempered tempest
ventured deliberately along the curves
of your ivory oasis
where a deserved restitution
re-knews the traveled and weary
woman within
Published 11th Jun 2018
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11th Jun 2018 6:05pm
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 6:51pm
Benediction, I tell ya. Laid at the altar of seduction. Beautiful poetry
...Willow
...Willow
Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 7:51pm
Killin it as always my friend.
11th Jun 2018 10:51pm
One of the finest reads I've read in tons-a-time. Bravo, and kudos to Your sensual palette of word-choice & phrasing. Absolutely lovely!
I wish I had written it!!!
Hey! : May I have Your permission to write one like it? To emulate it and borrow some phrases, and endow You with at least 1/2 of the writing credit? I love it!
~ Michael
I wish I had written it!!!
Hey! : May I have Your permission to write one like it? To emulate it and borrow some phrases, and endow You with at least 1/2 of the writing credit? I love it!
~ Michael
Anonymous
12th Jun 2018 00:14am
Again Naaj, you seduce with these lines - carrying us off to the land of nothing but warmth which flows inside a sea of tranquility...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
