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insecure me
silence
when i talk of how i feel
sometimes silence
when i've said too many words
when i've opened up too much
the silence starts
i try and talk to people
thinking that maybe they want to talk to me
but then my upsetting words come in
theirs silence from the other end
and thats when the insecurities strikes up
am i speaking too much ?
do i say too many words ?
am i simply too open with people
is it me or is it them
when i talk of how i feel
sometimes silence
when i've said too many words
when i've opened up too much
the silence starts
i try and talk to people
thinking that maybe they want to talk to me
but then my upsetting words come in
theirs silence from the other end
and thats when the insecurities strikes up
am i speaking too much ?
do i say too many words ?
am i simply too open with people
is it me or is it them
Published 10th Jun 2018
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10th Jun 2018 9:52pm
Such truth here ... been in this situation often ... well captured my poetess ...
11th Jun 2018 00:45am
11th Jun 2018 1:24am
Yes, it is them. I have experienced that too....
People are afraid of their own feelings. They freak out if you are open because you say what they don't dare to feel or say. They have been trained to stay on the surface, to be superficial and polite.
When they meet a real person they can't handle it. Sad but that's what I see.
People are afraid of their own feelings. They freak out if you are open because you say what they don't dare to feel or say. They have been trained to stay on the surface, to be superficial and polite.
When they meet a real person they can't handle it. Sad but that's what I see.
