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A Little Ditty For His Pretties
Something lies in the rings...
something crisp - or green
There's a cleanness - likeness, yes...
the color scheme of packaging
over bars of Irish Spring
something crisp - or green
There's a cleanness - likeness, yes...
the color scheme of packaging
over bars of Irish Spring
Published 10th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Yes, my husband has pretty eyes 😆 I know this is corny! I'll upload some real poems soon, but I couldn't help this one guys...I couldn't HAHA! I mean...c'mon!
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10th Jun 2018 7:41am
beautiful Atomik loving song
yes I can see why you want to sing about him..
this is fun and tenderly playful..
love Brenda
yes I can see why you want to sing about him..
this is fun and tenderly playful..
love Brenda
10th Jun 2018 9:44pm
10th Jun 2018 2:11pm
Well, I love the observation and presentation. Cute!
And it definitely doesn't stink! :-))
Corny, not at all. More likely your minds eye has an excellent corn....(ea).
And it definitely doesn't stink! :-))
Corny, not at all. More likely your minds eye has an excellent corn....(ea).
10th Jun 2018 9:45pm
Hehe! Puns are a beautiful thing. Iris more people would make them in the comments ;)
10th Jun 2018 2:30pm
Refreshing. Poems about the one we love are the most beautiful because they are written from the heart.
10th Jun 2018 9:46pm
11th Jun 2018 2:18am
11th Jun 2018 4:37am
Many thanks! Little poems have been capturing me lately as well around here and elsewhere :)
11th Jun 2018 6:26am
Often the poems with the fewest words convey a more powerful message. I enjoy very much the challenge of writing in Haiku or Senryu style. I wrote a ditty awhile back called "Poetditty" and it was fun to write.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/206339-poetditty/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/206339-poetditty/
