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Twin Flames
dip three fingers inside
trace your hand along the ache
it hurts to be fated to you
it hurts to live apart from you
inside the eye of truth
I see a home coming
set into motion by grand design
revolving in another's orbit
two become one
pass through sacred doorways
destined of blood, water, truth and love
burning with a need so great
placed deep within hallow chambers
twin spirits began their separate journeys
lost inside a powerful lust a greed is fulfilled
womanly chambers stir
as he rises to greet his love
with desires that rival each other's
fall naturally into a love the fates gifted
Master's voice is heard clear
when creamy intentions float to the surface
minxy will come out to play
no longer hidden
follow your heart inside true vision
love knows the way
to passion's dream realized
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Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 7:01am
A pinch of subtle romanticism
& a whole bottle of hot desire!
What a delightful dish you do serve up beautiful 😊😚
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10th Jun 2018 7:04am
thank you beautiful Rose for feeling the heat here ;)
you gifted me smiles..
love Crim
you gifted me smiles..
love Crim
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10th Jun 2018 7:06am
Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 7:12am
"Desires that rival each others"
Wow! This is rich as can be. Excellent Crim!
Wow! This is rich as can be. Excellent Crim!
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10th Jun 2018 7:26am
Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 7:18am
whose voice was that...sounds positive enough...I do enjoying reading all your posts Brenda...there seem many voices in your work...and astoundingly I believe you are more prolific than I am...and I know how much that takes among everything else going on...you must have immense reservoirs of energy to devote to writing...you are marvelous to know..
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Re: Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 7:28am
thank you dearest Lawrence they are all me as well my channeling..
I am very diverse in style and voice..
I'm so happy you are drawn to my writes..
writing is my passion I am driven it is both a blessing and a curse..
love Brenda
I am very diverse in style and voice..
I'm so happy you are drawn to my writes..
writing is my passion I am driven it is both a blessing and a curse..
love Brenda
Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 1:26pm
I love what happens behind sacred doorways. Another fantastic write, crimsin.
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10th Jun 2018 2:14pm
Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 2:32pm
You had me at "dip three fingers inside" ... love endless probing ... form their my seduction was ... inevitable ... wonderful write my poetess
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10th Jun 2018 2:36pm
giggles thank you beautiful Dragonfly for feeling this heated hungry write :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 2:51pm
Feeling it so much ... that I obliged ... then became ... inspired ... thanks my lovely ...
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10th Jun 2018 3:02pm
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10th Jun 2018 5:46pm
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Re. Twin Flames
10th Jun 2018 10:31pm
"pass through sacred doorways
destined of blood, water, truth and love
burning with a need so great
placed deep within hallow chambers
twin spirits began their separate journeys'
really love this piece Crims
the poem makes me read the lines over and over
love
Jeff
destined of blood, water, truth and love
burning with a need so great
placed deep within hallow chambers
twin spirits began their separate journeys'
really love this piece Crims
the poem makes me read the lines over and over
love
Jeff
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Re. Twin Flames
11th Jun 2018 1:46am
'' dip three fingers inside
trace your hand along the ache
it hurts to be fated to you
it hurts to live apart from you ''
that opening stanza right there...
damn!!
the whole vibe
was just lovingly conveyed...
and of course i'm diggin the pic...
trace your hand along the ache
it hurts to be fated to you
it hurts to live apart from you ''
that opening stanza right there...
damn!!
the whole vibe
was just lovingly conveyed...
and of course i'm diggin the pic...
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Re. Twin Flames
Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 2:25am
My love, I am beginning to catch up and going from most recent to the latter ones - you and I have been in sync more than usual the past several days and this ink is no exception...I just agree with sexy Naaj...those opening lines speak volumes...double edged swords confront many on a daily basis...it’s the licking of which side we choose to embrace...always seeking the truth and watching for the signs left by the Fates...beautiful ink my love...
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 6:08pm
Breathtaking poetry, my beautiful Dark Angel. It opens beautifully and follows through line by line all the way to the end. Gorgeous, absolutely. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Twin Flames
11th Jun 2018 6:11pm
thank you graciously beautiful Willow for feeling this write..giggles this one is actually one I sat on for a few days until it was right.. I need to practice more patience with my writes.. so they can fully have their say :)
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda