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Relate
Relationships...
based
on
...pleasures ephemeral
tend to fail
...at life in general...
based
on
...pleasures ephemeral
tend to fail
...at life in general...
Published 6th Jun 2018
| Edited 16th Feb 2020
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6th Jun 2018 9:38pm
It's not so much the pleasure
I have come to treasure
But more the whole connection
And loving affection
To first and foremost be friends
Does certainly make sense
I have come to treasure
But more the whole connection
And loving affection
To first and foremost be friends
Does certainly make sense
7th Jun 2018 2:02am
6th Jun 2018 10:07pm
7th Jun 2018 4:31am
From this part of the world we credit good work with a bells
Im saying that the poem (relate) is a beautiful piece that deserves our highest reward
Im saying that the poem (relate) is a beautiful piece that deserves our highest reward
7th Jun 2018 5:13am
Oh my.... in this corner of the planet it can refer to "Counseling" services...
Lordy... No wonder confusion reigned.
I always suspected that the "American" dialect was only loosely related to "English."This confirms it...
So thank you, poetOtragedy...
(It does make a great story... can't make this stuff up..!) Ely
Lordy... No wonder confusion reigned.
I always suspected that the "American" dialect was only loosely related to "English."This confirms it...
So thank you, poetOtragedy...
(It does make a great story... can't make this stuff up..!) Ely
7th Jun 2018 7:48pm
The fault is mine I shouldn't have used a phrase only South Africans knows but the fact of the matter is that's a great piece all round
7th Jun 2018 1:50am
7th Jun 2018 2:00am
