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Separateness
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My expensive mirrored apartment
My reflection in a mirror placed in front of a mirror
A guy I have not seen in uncountable years
Time is still waiting for me
My unconscious and my conscious selves
It is like another realm of life
Trying to see myself in everyone
As, outside, the city lifts off
Distancing and jointness ...
Viewing my experience as an observer
A condition in which I can continue forever
... ...
My expensive mirrored apartment
My reflection in a mirror placed in front of a mirror
A guy I have not seen in uncountable years
Time is still waiting for me
My unconscious and my conscious selves
It is like another realm of life
Trying to see myself in everyone
As, outside, the city lifts off
Distancing and jointness ...
Viewing my experience as an observer
A condition in which I can continue forever
... ...
Published 17th May 2018
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17th May 2018 1:39am
17th May 2018 1:45am
He nailed his balls to the wall-->sadomasochist corny shit I call stale Fritos
18th May 2018 2:46pm
11th Jun 2018 1:22am
This poem can certainly start many conversations , quite clever i must say that with a short poem you were able give layers of depth on how the mind thinks and how we perceive ourselves. Impressive!
12th Jun 2018 8:05pm
