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Swing
Published 14th May 2018
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14th May 2018 3:45pm
dearest David
so powerful a message
yes people need to listen
to those early cries for help
before there is a rope..
love Raven
so powerful a message
yes people need to listen
to those early cries for help
before there is a rope..
love Raven
19th May 2018 7:45am
Indeed Raven - listening is a skill :-)))))
Huge Hugssssss :-))))))))))))
Huge Hugssssss :-))))))))))))
Wow this haiku...very special...very powerful...very stylish....
I have read some haikus of yours, but this one really woke me up...
love
Jasmine
I have read some haikus of yours, but this one really woke me up...
love
Jasmine
19th May 2018 7:46am
Anonymous
14th May 2018 6:27pm
A clever use of words to deliver a sound message, David. Don't hang up indeed. Fierce hugs!
...Willow
...Willow
19th May 2018 7:48am
Yeah hanging up should never be a task worth doing :-((((
Thank you - Huge Big Hugs :-))))))))))))))))))))
Thank you - Huge Big Hugs :-))))))))))))))))))))
Anonymous
14th May 2018 11:56pm
Hanging up is not an option in this here neck of the woods...and it should be one anywhere...well done!!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
19th May 2018 7:49am
glad to hear that it should be rolled out worldwide :-))))
Huge Massive Hugs :-))))))))))))))))))
Huge Massive Hugs :-))))))))))))))))))
18th May 2018 7:17am
exceptional play on words, david
i had a run in with a noose quite a few years ago
not worth the time it took.
great write
#ninjakittyhugs
i had a run in with a noose quite a few years ago
not worth the time it took.
great write
#ninjakittyhugs
19th May 2018 7:51am
thank you for your understanding - been there too :-(((((
#scottishbearhugs :-)))))))))))))))))))
#scottishbearhugs :-)))))))))))))))))))
