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A Serious Case Of The Shys {Bad Case Of Revise Blues}
Sleeks
sensuous
entangled limbs
locked in fiery throes of passion
Tawdry,
raunchy
crudeness
fuck me here
fuck me now round
about round about of
any and everythng goes
The
lustfully
lewd can be
found among the
lone riders seeking
escape of the blue a
connoisseur of quick and
fast only their selves will do
All
sorts
of erotic
naughtiness
my eyes do read
flaming cheeks a rich
cherry hue hell I have even written a few
Out
of me
a comment
you can't even pry
It's
really
quite easy
to see It's simply
a serious case of the
shys it has me tongue tied and mute
See
nothing
so grand
as being prim
of proper or rude
nope not even a prude
Author's Note
Inspired by Blackwolf upon his discovery of a comment I made🍒
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
7th May 2018 7:04pm
You did it !
Glad it inspired you , Survivor...;)
Great match with the photo and poem !
And Well Penned , though I wonder ;
Were your cheeks red when you wrote this ?
...lol...
Glad it inspired you , Survivor...;)
Great match with the photo and poem !
And Well Penned , though I wonder ;
Were your cheeks red when you wrote this ?
...lol...
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
7th May 2018 7:19pm
No Blackwolf thanks for surge the urge of inspiration. The write and post only a bitty bit however the interaction, comments, are where the shyness and awkwardness come into the picture. I actually stumbled a bit especially the ending, I'm no good with anger, humor or erotica, lol although I do love the fun of the write. Once again my many appreciations for the many many kindnesses you so gracefully give. Much love and the deepest of respect,
Survivor
P.S. plus it's always a help when others pitch in.🍒
Survivor
P.S. plus it's always a help when others pitch in.🍒
Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
7th May 2018 9:39pm
The picture leads temptingly into the read. Can imagine she looks as if, say, her boyfriend has just given her a naked surprise when she arrived at his place!
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
7th May 2018 9:53pm
Hello Solomon, so good to see a new friend grace my page. Forget cheery cheeked I'd be several shades of scarlet, I don't think this awkwardness will ever leave me be lol. Many appreciations for your kindness and the scarlet cheeks left in wake of your images of surprise. Much Respect,
Survivor 🍒
Survivor 🍒
Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
9th May 2018 7:07am
I have written and will be posting up a poem that this picture has inspired, titled An Attack of the Blushes. The picture of this probably adolescent girl would suit well my poem's theme of youthful embarrassment.
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
9th May 2018 7:36am
I found it in Pinterest searching
~pictures of shy women or shyness, almost all pictures are not copyright and a simple button push you have all sorts of shyness everywhere. I will read your work, even if naughty, a comment though not my first still a rarity, hangs in the balance of which color of red lol. It pleases me to no end you liked my choice of picture
Many appreciations for all your kindnesses, deepest of respect,
Survivor🍒
~pictures of shy women or shyness, almost all pictures are not copyright and a simple button push you have all sorts of shyness everywhere. I will read your work, even if naughty, a comment though not my first still a rarity, hangs in the balance of which color of red lol. It pleases me to no end you liked my choice of picture
Many appreciations for all your kindnesses, deepest of respect,
Survivor🍒
Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
Anonymous
7th May 2018 10:18pm
Hahaha! It took me months before I could formulate even a two word comment on erotic. And I still blush! You gave me a giggle with this one. Mostly because I can sympathize. Nicely done! :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
7th May 2018 10:34pm
I have to "woman" up since I posted it however how in the heck does one go about commenting especially when some comments leave you stuttering and stammering lol. I keep telling myself I'm to old for such foolishness yet the awkwardness still remains. It's awesome I'm not alone, thank you Willow for not only gracing my page, sharing giggles and smiles, but also your praise, it means so much these many many kindnesses from a highly respected Poetess and a dear friend, many many appreciations, much love and mad mad respect,
me
me
Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
Anonymous
7th May 2018 11:00pm
To be honest, I think my first few comments were something to the effect of "Oh my.." or "Damn!" It gets a lottle easier the longer you do it. I started out with friends I was comfortable with and slowly built on that. Ain't nithing wrong with stammering...sometimes the write warrants it! LMAO!
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
7th May 2018 11:11pm
I have always been uncomfortable in a man's sexual innuendo, hell I've been married for 28yrs and still am awkward, I know I've got to try, at least hopefully for the ease, for the first time in my life my foot refuses to move a single step forward funny as heck too be stuck in this sandtrap, knowing what needs to be done, for once I do a bit of stubbornness has backfired, egads.
All sorts of smiles blushing and plenty of laughing,
Survivor🍒
All sorts of smiles blushing and plenty of laughing,
Survivor🍒
Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
Anonymous
7th May 2018 11:20pm
Smiles & laughter are a good thing! Feel free to practice on my erotic nonsense. I never take myself too seriously. 🤣 You'll be just fine. Dip a toe in and give it a try. And then dash off laughing and blushing like I do. :-)
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
7th May 2018 11:29pm
Some serious gathering of courage, you know the irony, I can read what some post under erotica and rightfully so, is when it involves memories or reflection of your, I have no problem, to me there is nothing more graceful or beautiful watching a victim bloom into a true Survivor, pouring out the infection and taking back their power and gaining control, it's just the raunchy, even though the few I wrote there is not a lick of grace to be found hahaha...😱
Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
8th May 2018 1:20am
That's a really sweet tribute to the erotic writers on the site. Well done Survivor.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
8th May 2018 2:35am
Hello Daniel, now if only I could read and place a comment. My problem is I'm not experienced or comfortable enough to critique all my comments center around how the poem makes me feel and the inspiration I find. Well now that my friend wouldn't be quite right, can you just imagine how that comment would go???lol.Thank you so much my dearest friend, your support and encouragement mean everything to me and I do so cherish your input, so very much appreciations for all your kindnesses, much love and mad mad respect,
Survivor ☯️
Survivor ☯️
Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
9th May 2018 10:41pm
Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
9th May 2018 11:16pm
The shys are the main issue but then it rattles around your playing with fire your not here so your words can get their freak on you know. Erotica has my mind boggled. I've never really been comfortable In compliments praise any kind of hoola boo concerning m. Iol
I have however gave 2 comments in sublte semi innocent erotica today so I have tried. Deepest of Respect ,
me
I have however gave 2 comments in sublte semi innocent erotica today so I have tried. Deepest of Respect ,
me
Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
13th May 2018 7:13am
Wow great piece, I love when a piece is written by someone else but really makes you see yourself in it👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys
13th May 2018 2:37pm
Hello Keyshia, so good to see you, a new friend, gracing my page, yeah I'm not so good telling someone how their erotica made me feel, God gawd I blush at just the thought of how that would go lol. Many appreciations for all your kindnesses, much respect,
Survivor
Survivor
Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys {Bad Case Of Revise Blues}
Anonymous
21st May 2018 8:51pm
This one still.sensual to me idk why but it is...
Great work
Autumm
Great work
Autumm
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys {Bad Case Of Revise Blues
26th May 2018 7:50pm
Hey Gypsy, sorry I've been in and out. Careful less I'm tongue tied lol. It actually sorta was meant to be yet also explains the mystery of me, also lol. Thank you for your many kindnesses, I deeply appreciate them. Much love and mad respect,
me🍒
me🍒
Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys {Bad Case Of Revise Blues}
29th May 2018 7:21am
It’s hard to break the shyness. Especially when I feel like such a dork with some moments 😁
Really enjoyed the read
Really enjoyed the read
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Re: Re. A Serious Case Of The Shys {Bad Case Of Revise Blues
29th May 2018 4:20pm
It just seems so "wrong" allowing another to see how turned on their poem made me, and now I'm gigglin like hell😂!
Thank you Devil for your many kindnesses, many appreciations. Much Love,
me
Thank you Devil for your many kindnesses, many appreciations. Much Love,
me
Anonymous
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