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L o v e
i
love
you
my dear
and that is
all i know
© cold_fusion 2018. All rights reserved.
Published 4th May 2018
Author's Note
should be no-brainer to any one who's ever been in love- once you love someone, you only know that and everything else becomes irrelevant - flaws and all. Blind love..of course.
Written for EpicUtester's "Love" Competition. Inspired by reality of course.
Written for EpicUtester's "Love" Competition. Inspired by reality of course.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
4th May 2018 2:53pm
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4th May 2018 2:55pm
honestly... i don't think there
is much left
to be said once
you're in....
welcome
is the Poet Admired!!
Welcome is
the review!
appreciation.
immense!
is much left
to be said once
you're in....
welcome
is the Poet Admired!!
Welcome is
the review!
appreciation.
immense!
4th May 2018 3:10pm
Real love, that constant spiritual connection that makes most other thoughts irrelevant
Not everyone is privy;
To such beauty bestowed upon the chosen all I'll say is be grateful for it;
For it'll never depart once within hold of one's heart
Exactly how love should be
Sorry for my ramble to what us a beautiful poetry piece
Not everyone is privy;
To such beauty bestowed upon the chosen all I'll say is be grateful for it;
For it'll never depart once within hold of one's heart
Exactly how love should be
Sorry for my ramble to what us a beautiful poetry piece
4th May 2018 3:16pm
no..no..no...not ramble at all my friend...exactly the sentiment
when this originated...
so glad my peers got it!!
was dead certain inside as felt there is nothing else that can say it better yet the words on paper started to wobble, but went with what the heart felt and felt
welcome
is the Friend admired!!
welcome
is the review insightful and deep!!
immense
the appreciation.
when this originated...
so glad my peers got it!!
was dead certain inside as felt there is nothing else that can say it better yet the words on paper started to wobble, but went with what the heart felt and felt
welcome
is the Friend admired!!
welcome
is the review insightful and deep!!
immense
the appreciation.
4th May 2018 3:19pm
4th May 2018 3:20pm
4th May 2018 5:18pm
Simplicity at it's finest, there's so little love in this world one should hold tight and cherish it when found. Love the impact and indeed it speaks volumes. Much love and mad mad respect,
me
me
4th May 2018 6:16pm
Welcome
is the Friend Amired!!
Welcome
is the review insightful!
sometimes, few words naturally encompass all.
sometimes, not much is left to be said.
appreciation.
deep.
immense.
is the Friend Amired!!
Welcome
is the review insightful!
sometimes, few words naturally encompass all.
sometimes, not much is left to be said.
appreciation.
deep.
immense.
Anonymous
5th May 2018 8:37am
*sigh*
5th May 2018 2:04pm
Anonymous
5th May 2018 6:22pm
this literally made breaths escape from behind my ribs
gawd its just beautiful
gawd its just beautiful
5th May 2018 6:33pm
made me collapse in humility.
the appreciation.
but agian, picked self up, saying well,
it's the way it is...L o v e
i just mentioned. that's all.
welcome
is the Admired Poet.
Welcome
is the review beautiful.
appreciation.
immense.
the appreciation.
but agian, picked self up, saying well,
it's the way it is...L o v e
i just mentioned. that's all.
welcome
is the Admired Poet.
Welcome
is the review beautiful.
appreciation.
immense.
6th May 2018 3:55pm
sometimes
some drops-
they hold depths of oceans.
no point
needing more.
welcome
firstly to the community
as well as to the scribble dear poet.
visit, review
appreciated. deeply so.
some drops-
they hold depths of oceans.
no point
needing more.
welcome
firstly to the community
as well as to the scribble dear poet.
visit, review
appreciated. deeply so.
6th May 2018 8:20pm
the dripping drop...of life..this love ..in an unconditional fullform .. nothing more is as heightened as this expressed intensity ..
its amazing wen one realizes this simple truth..in its striking essence ..that which is life'line' is ever the dripping drops of sparklets of a flame that's unceasing...evokes the infinite depths ur brevity dear poet!
its amazing wen one realizes this simple truth..in its striking essence ..that which is life'line' is ever the dripping drops of sparklets of a flame that's unceasing...evokes the infinite depths ur brevity dear poet!
6th May 2018 8:31pm
welcome
is the Artist Admired!!
welcome
is the feedback deep and intense!!
dear Friend, you make poems on my scribbles with your in-depth and intensely insightful reviews!! amazing. is a small word.
well, essence
doubt anyone knows it better than the Artist admired. And yes, Essence also need only a little drop to have the profound character in the substance it assimilates into...
in this case...the drop of life!!
and do we need to know anything but that?
is the Artist Admired!!
welcome
is the feedback deep and intense!!
dear Friend, you make poems on my scribbles with your in-depth and intensely insightful reviews!! amazing. is a small word.
well, essence
doubt anyone knows it better than the Artist admired. And yes, Essence also need only a little drop to have the profound character in the substance it assimilates into...
in this case...the drop of life!!
and do we need to know anything but that?
