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Field of flowers
Last night I dreamed of you but this one not like the others
I dreamt of blue skies and cotton like clouds
Holding hands and laughing out loud
Laying back in a field of sun flowers
Enjoying the smell of rain from the passing sun shower
Sipping mimosas and eating cheese and grapes
This was the sweetest thing I’ve ever done on a date
No electronics no outside world
Nothing but time for boy to realize he has fallen for girl
They say you should stop and smell the roses
I’d much rather stare at how the sun flower poses
I dreamt of blue skies and cotton like clouds
Holding hands and laughing out loud
Laying back in a field of sun flowers
Enjoying the smell of rain from the passing sun shower
Sipping mimosas and eating cheese and grapes
This was the sweetest thing I’ve ever done on a date
No electronics no outside world
Nothing but time for boy to realize he has fallen for girl
They say you should stop and smell the roses
I’d much rather stare at how the sun flower poses
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Re. Field of flowers
29th Apr 2018 1:42pm
“Nothing but time for boy to realize he has/fallen for girl” ... perfect perfect line break with this ... I tumbled as well. Sweet soft write my poetess
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29th Apr 2018 2:46pm
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29th Apr 2018 2:29pm
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29th Apr 2018 2:50pm
Sweet innocent little dream. “Not like the others” 🤣 cute and clever line. It’s nice to have an innocent moment.
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Re. Field of flowers
29th Apr 2018 3:26pm
nice...to escape to beautiful places
...and why not.
job. taking the readers places...
nice places..
...and why not.
job. taking the readers places...
nice places..
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30th Apr 2018 00:20am
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29th Apr 2018 9:06pm
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Re. Field of flowers
30th Apr 2018 00:48am
nothing like the beautiful trinity of
nature woman and man...
where love blossoms under the sun..
nature woman and man...
where love blossoms under the sun..
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30th Apr 2018 4:12pm
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Re. Field of flowers
1st May 2018 3:28am
Hey Nikk......a gorgeous piece......pic is beautiful......your graceful words brought to life......well done.....enjoyed very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Field of flowers
4th May 2018 1:39pm
I like your poems they bring me to the places. This is another one. :)
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4th May 2018 3:06pm