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Music
Think of us, as the white piano keys
Ready to play our song
We play well ...on the surface
But depth is missing
Without the harmony of the black keys
There is no soul
To our music
Let's pause ...reflect
Find our harmony
Then, create our
Masterpiece
Ready to play our song
We play well ...on the surface
But depth is missing
Without the harmony of the black keys
There is no soul
To our music
Let's pause ...reflect
Find our harmony
Then, create our
Masterpiece
Published 27th Apr 2018
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The second of two inspired by the same picture
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27th Apr 2018 9:48pm
i love this :-) i love your idea here, how you have taken the idea of a piano , to describe love and how it can be improved, you need the black keys too , lol .. great poem
27th Apr 2018 10:13pm
27th Apr 2018 10:55pm
28th Apr 2018 1:15am
I like this parallel of piano keys in harmony as related to our relationships. I am immediately drawn to anything music related because music fuels my life. Beautiful write, brava!
Anonymous
28th Apr 2018 3:53am
Very nice..
Dave
Dave
Admittedly, a minor chord always gives a tune some melancholy or balance between light & dark. Nice write as always, Justy. ;-)
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
28th Apr 2018 11:15am
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