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Lyrical
Fellatio fellatio
What is the ratio
Of a kiss to a blow
To make you grow
Cunnilingus cunnilingus
Your tongue lingers
My rubicund mound
Your skill renowned
What is the ratio
Of a kiss to a blow
To make you grow
Cunnilingus cunnilingus
Your tongue lingers
My rubicund mound
Your skill renowned
Published 25th Apr 2018
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5th May 2018 9:18pm
Oh this is so clever ... like the quick lines ... sharp line breaks ... and dueling symmetry between the two stanzas ... four lines each ... my favorite
5th May 2018 9:58pm
5th May 2018 10:04pm
You're most welcome ... I try to be specific about what I like in people's poems ...
